I have been granted a challenge,
in honor of Poetry Month,
to try and compose,
something different than rambling prose.
I don’t claim to be a poet,
but occasionally I like to try.
Sometimes the words will flow,
and the ideas will grow,
and I find myself enmeshed,
in the medium that works best,
to convey the scattered thoughts,
passing images.
Music without notes,
with space for dreams to fill.
As a child I thought,
all poems ought,
to do their best,
to reach and wrest,
to speak of dreams,
and flowery things.
I stretched my brain,
feeling half insane,
to find the words,
sometimes absurd,
to make the rhyme,
every time.
As time went on,
(the rhyming not quite gone),
I spread my wings,
and tried new things.
Exploring the ways,
I could alter a phrase,
in ways to convey,
what I was trying to say.
It is still a challenge,
to write this way.
But I have had to learn,
that some story yearn,
to be heard and seen,
in a way reflective,
of their true being.
Some stories must be told,
with lots of prose.
Conversations,
and many scenes.
But just the same,
some long to be portrayed,
with deceptively simple,
poetical phrase.

congrats on being Freshly Pressed!!
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Thank you!! I’m very excited!
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as you should be!! 🙂
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What a wonderful combo of words and poetry! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you!
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This is stunning. Well done 🙂
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Thanks so much!!
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I like it I write poems but they don’t rhyme it was cool
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Whenever I start writing poetry I find myself having to consciously remind myself that it doesn’t have to rhyme. But.. Dr. Seuss was the earliest poet I was exposed to, and something about that just ingrains itself in you.
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Your page is a pleasure. This will be a regular page for me 🙂
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoy it 🙂
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Lovely. And witty too.
I like how you mentioned Dr. Seuss above in a comment. So many people are “scared” of poetry, and don’t realize they grew up reading it. Shel Silverstein sparked my love.
Congrats on being Freshly Pressed; well deserved. – Christy
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I’m one of those ones who is sometimes scared by poetry — but, as you said, so many of those early-writers that I read and adored were writing poetry. It’s sad that so much is done around poetry that can elevate it to this idea of being something very elite and esoteric… when it can be very down-to-earth and real (and fun!)
Thank you!
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Wish your words keep flowing and your ideas keep growing:)
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Thank you!!! 🙂
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You rose to the challenge well. Love it!
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Thank you!
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Absolutely wonderful!!
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This is beautiful, well done.
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It is really nice indeed. Can you tell me as to how long did you take to compose this poem? How many hours a day? Or did you finish it in just one sitting?
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Good question… I’m always curious about how long it takes people to complete writing projects too.
Of course, it’s one of those questions that is often hard to answer. I did not just sit down and write it out (very few things that I write come out in just one sitting), but it was worked on in bits and pieces over a day or two. I had a few phrases that came to me, that I knew I wanted to conclude — and the concept came pretty quickly. But then I worked on phrases, and the order of things, in bits and pieces until is seemed to work.
And since it was a poem, and not my normal medium, and I figured it was just going to be another blog-post that a handful of people read, I didn’t put as much time into it as I probably would have if I were putting up some of my fiction.
Talk about a good lesson in the power of ignoring your inner editor and trusting your gut!
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great very well it is fresh thanks for sharing
uparekh
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Excellent…………….
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Wonderful piece! I’m always encouraged to write my own poems whenever I read something great poems like this. Congrats on the FP!
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Oooh, thank you! It’s still kind of amazing to me that a poem I wrote would inspire others to write! Hope you write some awesome work!
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please read my poem at this link http://smriti198719.wordpress.com/2014/04/19/chronicles-of-satan-for-the-wise/
would love to have your feedback
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p.s. its a very nice n b’fully rhymed piece u’ve created 🙂 thumbs up 🙂
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“deceptively simple” yet deeply poetical..
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great
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Reblogged this on Maham Sohail.
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Well done! This is fabulous, you seem to be a poet after all.
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Apparently so! That thought is still sinking it…
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Whenever I fill out a medical form I put Dr Suess as my Doctor, no one has ever questioned this…it’s cool to blend the rhyme with prose and pause bits, look forward to reading more, have fun with it.
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This is an awesome poem I like it following you..
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Beautiful!
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Reblogged this on santhoshsonu.
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wow
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Reblogged this on janoell's Blog.
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Love the rhythm! Great fun too!
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Reblogged this on perk2911.
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I was depressed some moments ago n ur poetry changed my mood. Its magical!!!
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Reblogged this on notaphoenixyet's Blog and commented:
Ahh…..poetry!
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Well thought out and surprisingly uplifting. Nice.
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Woww.. love poetry much… thank you for sharing
hmm.. thinking about how to tell all the journey in poetry..
how lucky you are to be featured in Freshly Pressed..
Wonder when it comes to me.. haha
Please visit my blog Indonesiabestplaces.wordpress.com to know more about my journey
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Reblogged this on kalijamaicagial's Blog and commented:
Truth has been spoken
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Good version of writeup
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Reblogged this on FunForAllReaders.
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Nice, well-done… Congrats for being in FP!
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Beautifu
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Reblogged this on Poesias.
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Not a fan of the ocean..but good article
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I don’t know much about poetry but I really felt that it was great reading it.
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Thank you! You should take a look at my post “Finding Poetry”… I don’t really know much about poetry either! And honestly, I think more of us who don’t really “know about it,” who haven’t studied it, should start reading and writing it more. 🙂
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Well yes I would agree with you and will look and as a matter of fact I wrote a piece just yesterday, if you can have a look, it would be great , thanks
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very nice poetry! I love it! Inspires me to start writing poems. Got 2 try it sometime
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Go for it! I’ve been finding it kind of freeing to try!
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Great your are great. Like your poem.
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Reblogged this on Christina Jose and commented:
simple yet powerful 🙂
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Reblogged this on lsullivan10.
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Beautifully composed piece. Well done, and congrats on the FP!!
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Beautiful:)
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Great work! And congratulations!
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Enjoyed it. Keep having Adventures 🙂
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Reblogged this on canva29.
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I sang this poem as I was reading it. Beautiful.
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Oh! I would love to hear it as a song. Some of the other poetry I have written is actually song lyrics… mostly ballad-like, or funny songs that are sung by one of the cultures in one of the fantasy-story-worlds I’ve created.
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Yeah, i love reading your peom Keep posting!
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Reblogged this on josiecortez777's Blog and commented:
Some stories must be told.
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Reblogged this on Yuri G. 94 and commented:
Poetry and Pictures are perfects complements
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Reblogged this on Poetry Lobby and commented:
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Support Poetry Movement by Visiting http://www.skreened.com/poetrylobby or at poetrylobby.com
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Superb lines…. Really enjoyed reading….. 🙂
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Reblogged this on amandawilliams187.
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Brilliant 🙂
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That is a very beautiful and creative poem!! I love your title, “Adventures in Poetry..” That really caught my eye so that I stopped here to read it. And your pictures are beautiful too.
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Reads just like me, off now to hit the follow button – perhaps you would like to comment on my scribbling – all opinions welcome – good to have found you on my travels.
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Reblogged this on The Angel Above Us and commented:
I LOVE POETRY!! This is definitely worth reading…and re-reblogging, perhaps? XD
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Thank you!
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witty and artistic
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Awesome!
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